Average Views: - 1, 355. It can only get better, not worse XD). Sorry author I'm not your intended audience so don't take what iv said to heart. Aku Ditakdirkan hanya untuk Mencintaimu( Widyawati27).
I have a brother who's a bonafide Otaku. Korean, Romance, School Life, Shounen ai. Register For This Site. Its popularity stems from 15 beautiful heroines.
Like most Light Novels. Japanese, Manga, Josei(W), Smut, Childhood Friends, College life, Romance. Trapped in the academy's eroge 28. Instant perfect wife/slave that loves him unconditionaly for no reason. Suggestion: Make the five years quickly go by in a few sentences like a training montage after he awakes quintessence and then start the story with his spirit summon event, following with the start of the game. Then I, Fukushima Aki, a young adult who died at the age of 19 from a terminal illness. Can't say much right now cause 6 Chapters aren't enough to have a solid character base (for one MC it can be doable, but not for side characters). Not the Worst Beginning.
One star for Grammer and one for how the plot flows which honestly probably due to Grammer too. For the author: the story mak ème think of a manga/manhua where the MC is dropped in another word with power too, reincarned as the hero best friend / clown friend, where he control a red scarf, does it give you idea or did you don't know this story? Please Know That I'm Really Jealous ~A Former Yandere Boy Can Be Brutal To Get Married~. She can always feel when he's horny, often because of her looks, which would lead to embarassing/funny moments. An Eroge bishoujo game is particularly popular among young lads. Trapped in the academy's eroge 31. Review at chapter 6 can change for the better or worse. Bad End Mokuzen no Heroine ni Tensei shita Watashi, Konse de wa Renai suru Tsumori ga Cheat na Ani ga Hanashite kuremasen!?
The game's story revolves around the protagonist named Shin Morino, an idealist of justice and peace. Koware Skill de Hajimeru Gendai Dungeon Kouryaku. Japanese, Manga, Shoujo(G), Fantasy, Isekai, Magic, Romance, School Life. Korean, Manhwa, Webtoon, Yaoi(BL), Omegaverse, Romance. I was granted a second chance to live a new life. Trapped in the academy's eroge chapter 13. The goddess summon was a terrible plot device. 26 chapters in and there was nothing but a training arc and harem plot, so I quit. Nonetheless, with this second chance, I will live my life to the fullest! If ya seek/want to read something from the Eroge trope and want an Male Protagonist/MC than that could be something for you. The previous story doesn't matter and he only vaguely recollects it to the point you wonder why have this premise at all. Advice to the Author: Pace your progression better and don't make long training arcs, specially the first one. Living in the hospital, nearly my entire teenage life, shackled unto my bed, but that all changed when I died.
When I'm not to lazy to change it XD). A better idea: She was bound to him by an unknown force and is trapped as his summon, being angry/embarassed about it all the time while not helping in any way(to avoid him being too OP), but slowly will warm up as the story progresses and start being a tsundere with her help. Some structuring and checking the typos would be great and ya would have a bona-fide story. Japanese, Manga, Shounen(B), Action, Adaptation, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy. Seems to be a slow burner. Progress the story first and have the MC getting stronger while facing challenges through it, not just sparing safely at home for several chapters. Chinese, Manhua, Shoujo(G), Drama, Fantasy, Romance, School Life. However, that second chance was to live in the world of Spirit Infinite, the same game that my brother introduced to me. Grammar: 4/5 (not yet good enough for 5 but not bad enough for a lower score). Korean, Manhwa, Shoujo(G), Adaptation, Drama, Fantasy, Full Color, Historical, Romance, Royal family, Royalty. Japanese, Doujinshi, Josei(W), Adult, Hentai, Smut, Drama, Oneshot, Supernatural. Total Views: - 51, 505. Feels like I'm listening to borat read the story to me. You will receive a link to create a new password via email.
Made it to 29 and yeah I'm out not for me. So I on my part will be lenient. If you are into Magic Isekai (Eroge worldstyle) than that story could be something. Style: 5/5 (cause I love that type).
Characters: 4/5 (early 4 cause not enough information about characters).
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